On Saturday me and my family went to the beach for a fish. Sadly we did not catch anything but we went netting and we got heaps of bait fish . me and my siblings made a small pool but each time we put water in the pool the sand absorbs the water.
Cool Alex, it looks like you had a great day with your whanau. Better luck next time for catching some fish!
ReplyDeleteHi Alex,I'm Heidi from St Patrick's school in Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteIt looks like it was a great day at the beach.Did you have a good time?
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Heidi
Thank you Heidi
Deletehi Alex look like u had a great day at the beach hope u had a great time.
ReplyDeleteThank you Kade
DeleteHi Alex looks like a fun day at the beach you had. Next time try to keep one space between each word.
ReplyDeleteThank you max
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