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Thursday, June 13, 2019

Some of 4 sentences from my weekend


I heard the whistle blow for the start for kick off.

I felt my heart rapidly through my chest.

I saw the ball flying down as fast as it can into the other team arms.

I wondered who going to win as or them.

5 comments:

  1. Kia ora Alex,Im Charlie from Matawai school,
    is your writing about rugby? I love rugby and I play in an under 13 team.
    I wonder if you won ,did you

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    1. Hi Charlie nice comment yes my writing is about rugby.How well is your team going and yes we did win.

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  2. Hi Alex charlie here,
    Our team has won 4 games and lost 2. Our club is called Ngatapa what is your club called? Do you like to go hunting because I love hunting, Do you live on a farm or in a town?

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  3. Kia ora. I am kaelyn from Matawai School.
    I really like to play rugby to i am in front and i play 8th man
    I think your writing is really amazing and descriptive
    Did you win the game?
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    kaelyn

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  4. Kai ora Alex
    I am maranga from matawai school and I love rugby to. I am a huge fan of the all blacks and they are the best. I play wing or first five and I am good at rugby.The story you wrote what were you writing about.
    Bye for now

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